Analysis of A Oldie But A Goodie

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



An Oldie But A Goodie

Here is wisdom
Everyone should know
We all gather fruits
From the seeds we sow
We sow the seeds
All of our days
And the fruits thereof
Help guide our ways
So sow the seeds
Which you know are right
And the fruits thereof
Will lead to the light

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh


Scheme x xxxxabCbadCd x
Poetic Form
Metre 1101010 1110 1011 11101 10111 1101 11101 0011 11101 1101 11111 0011 11101 10010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 295
Words 60
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 12, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

I remembered this one after reading Jeremiah 50… Can I really be the man of sin as some might believe…Well in a way I may have been at one point…When I made a covenant with the kind folks at American Home Products and gave them the keys to the bottomless pit…I was on a mission and I was trying to find a loophole which might allow the rich into the kingdom of heaven…Well needless to say the covenant was broken and greed has run rampant ever since…Oh well…Can this truly be the final judgement of all of mankind???Well…That is a question that only mankind can answer…I have already judged mankind and My Father is currently in the process of issuing his punishment…How much worse might things get???Well…That all depends on mankind…

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Written on July 17, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on July 18, 2023

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