Analysis of Afraid to miss you

Obed daniels 1981 (GranadaHills)



I miss you a ton i feel a void in the upper middle chest
Empty abandoned broken locks and cut chains weighs heavy weekend the back of my knees. I hate to lay down here cause it's dark. And im afraid of the dark


Scheme AB
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111010010101 100101010111101011111111111110101101
Characters 210
Words 44
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 2
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 82
Words per line (avg) 22
Letters per stanza (avg) 164
Words per stanza (avg) 44

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Being afraid to miss someone special to you

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Submitted by It2it on July 23, 2023

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Obed daniels

My name is obed Daniels This is about me I had to learn as an adult as a child there were loving parents Integrity love respect To be caring Was what they taught. Although we weren’t rich We had plenty thanks to my father Who’s pockets were never empty One day my mother decided to leave my father I remember so vividly When she walked out that door I couldn’t understand What was happening I was playing Atari Eyes glued to the screen But my ears listening to them argue My mother said to me You don’t have to stay with your daddy If you want You can bring your Atari Like if that was a deal breaker Even though it was something I cared for It was my sisters and mother whom Needed me to look after To be continued more…

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