Analysis of I Want to be a Bird



When I come back in my next life
I want to be a bird.

I’ll be free from political strife,
And my ways won’t seem absurd.

I’ll soar and sing and play all day
Riding the currents of air

I’ll see the world in a different way
And will say that life is fair.

I won’t be limited to pleasing others
With no regard for myself.

I won’t be labeled whom I’m not
Nor confined to a narrow shelf.

When I’m a bird I’ll be so free
With a panoramic view.

I will flit from tree to tree.
I’ll wing to somewhere new.

I won’t be stuck in one small place
That feels like a prison cell

I’ll be able to see the world
And I plan to see it well.


Scheme AB AB CD CD XE XE FG FG XH XH
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 11110111 111101 111101001 0111101 11010111 1001011 1101001001 0111111 11110011010 110111 11110111 10110101 11011111 100101 1111111 11111 11110111 1110101 11101101 0111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 657
Words 150
Sentences 9
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 47
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

This poem came to me while on my daily walk as I watched various birds with envy.

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Written on June 26, 2023

Submitted by janet_1 on July 30, 2023

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Janet Muirhead Hill

Janet Muirhead Hill is a novelist who occasionally writes poetry for fun and for self-expression. Her published books include the Miranda and Starlight series of horse stories for middle-grade readers and other fiction. more…

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