Analysis of Mother



Last breath
I was there,
a slight breeze
of disease
in the air.

First breath
you were there,
a smile of
joy for your
baby boy.

It takes such
a long time to
grow up,
and such a
short time
to grow old


Scheme ABCCB ABXXX XXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11 111 011 101 001 11 101 011 111 101 111 0111 11 010 11 111
Characters 225
Words 57
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 6
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 9
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 50
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

I was with my mother the moment she died and this poem reflects the thoughts I had at that moment.

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Written on July 01, 2023

Submitted by on July 23, 2023

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Thomas Molitor

Thomas writes poetry because he loves words and hates money. more…

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