Analysis of MY MOTHER, ALWAYS A LADY



    MY MOTHER, ALWAYS A LADY
 I think that I can remember,
The way you made me see the light of day;
The pains you bore,
So cruelly carved upon your, not ugly face;
The spasms playing on your trembling body
When you, in all that world of bitterness,
Struggled to bring me, willingly, to life
While I, like a wicked wretch, took a while
To look and say, goodbye,
To that liquid mess where, in many a month,
I dared my head to rest.

I can surely remember, the tears you shed;
That proud and wonderful look in your eyes
When, at last, you held me tight against your milk-filled breasts;
And I can still feel your tenderness,
That soft and warm touch of your tear-moistened lips,
As you tossed me a long desired kiss.
Many things I have forgotten, but I'll never forget
That divine smile of satisfaction,
Of a long extended toil well accomplished,
So majestically drawn upon your essence and me.

And you were, and I was to be.
Now, I am, but you are not,
And I can't make you be, no matter how hard I try.
I am sad and lonesome, now
Without a trace of you, for you are not, gone forever
Because life has only turned its eyes on me.
Oh, how I wish I were the one who had to say, goodbye!


Scheme ABXXXACXXDXX XXXCXXXXXA AXDXBAD
Poetic Form
Metre 1101010 11111010 0111110111 0111 11010111101 010101110010 1101111100 1011110011 1110101101 11011 11101101001 111111 11100100111 1101001011 1111111011111 011111100 11011111101 1111010101 10111010111001 10111010 10101011010 10100010111001 01001111 1111111 0111111101111 1110101 01011111111010 01111011111 1111100111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,186
Words 252
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 12, 10, 7
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 300
Words per stanza (avg) 77

About this poem

I wrote this poem because when my mother was dying, I was in another country and I had no money to travel back home. She implored me to return home for she wanted to see me before she died but believe me, I couldn't.

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Written on September 12, 2020

Submitted by jaimeherreraf56 on July 10, 2023

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