Analysis of Wishlist



One day I will sit down
One day I will sit down

And write about
The albino raven-
He was my muse
and my poet, too!

One day I’ll write about
That bastard era- when
My universe was looted
My innocence starved.

One day I will sit down and think
All the things I want to think about!

One day I will write-
Our battle with Cancer and
Realized-  “God is the greatest”  

One day I will write about
My Teddy and his chivalry

One day, one day
I will write about how
my fastest-growing dream
Suddenly bleed to the end!

One day I will write about
yes, #metoo!

One day I will write about
The nothingness of betrayal

One day I will write about
L-O-V-E


Scheme AA bxxx bxxx xb xxx Bc xxxx Bb Bx Bc
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 111111 0101 00110 1111 01101 111101 110101 110110 11001 11111101 101111101 11111 10101100 1011010 1111101 11001100 1111 111011 110101 1001101 1111101 11 1111101 01001010 1111101 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 669
Words 153
Sentences 6
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 2, 3, 2, 4, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

Muse comes but I can't sit down to write, I am always busy with chores or at work. Kids are small. So I think to write in detail about them later in life when I will have some time to sit and write!

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Written on July 06, 2023

Submitted by atika_c on July 06, 2023

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Atika Cherry

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