Analysis of The First To Cry



I was the first to cry
when daddy died
lying there so peacefully
in his golden casket
yet, I give him so much grief
being the youngest boy
in the family
always competing with my older
brothers for daddy's affection
oh, what laddy I was back then
mischief knows me well
as long as I live,
on the face of this earth,
your son will earn his due, first
yet, prove his worth


Scheme ABCDEFCGHIJKLML
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 110111 1101 1011100 011010 1111111 100101 00100 10101110 10110010 1111111 10111 11111 101111 1111111 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 369
Words 75
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 290
Words per stanza (avg) 73
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Written on August 18, 2023

Submitted by ggolden9 on August 18, 2023

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