Analysis of SHAKE MY MIND

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



I want to take these words of mine and write them in the bright blue sky while asking and answering why. My eyes are tired more now that I sleep when I'm awake. My bones are cold I'm starting to shake, so I turn off my mind just in time to watch the furnace burn the coal from my soul to keep myself warm.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111111011001111100100111110111111101111111011111111101110101011111111
Characters 305
Words 64
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 236
Words per line (avg) 64
Letters per stanza (avg) 236
Words per stanza (avg) 64
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Written on August 18, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on August 18, 2023

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I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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