Analysis of The dandelion clock

Royston 1946 (Reading)



I picked the loades dandelion stem and I blew
watching each of the seedlings as they flew.
1-o’clock, 2-o’clock, counting each hour,
hoping each seed would become a new flower.

7-o’clock, 8-o’clock, they wafted into the sky
11-o’clock, 12-o’clock, as the hours flew by.
15-o’clock, 16-o’clock, I was having such fun
watching each seedling fly up to the sun


Scheme AABB CCDD
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11011001011 1011010111 1110110 10111010110 111100101 11101011 11111011 1011011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 373
Words 64
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

Remembering my grandson having so much fun with a dandelion that had gone to seed. I was chuckling because he was running out of puff and had called out 26-o’clock as he blew away the last seedling

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Submitted by royston on August 20, 2023

Modified by royston on October 02, 2023

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