Analysis of Hold Me In The Rain



On earth, as it is in heaven
I feel the sweet taste of sin
The sting of death in mortal men
Release me from the claws of pain
Anoint thy flesh in holy rain
Engage the spirit in song and dance
Cleanse the heart and take the chance
Quench the flame and end thy thirst
A burst of rain the soul immersed
Release me from the claws of pain
Then, you hold me in the rain
This I  know, you help me grow


Scheme abcDdeeffDdg
Poetic Form
Metre 11111010 1101111 01110101 01110111 01110101 010100101 1010101 1010111 01110101 01110111 1111001 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 394
Words 83
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 308
Words per stanza (avg) 84
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Written on August 22, 2023

Submitted by ggolden9 on August 22, 2023

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