Analysis of Breath



I can't breath
I take a deep breath and let it go but no relief
I feel my throat tighten up
My lungs are getting smaller and smaller
My heart is beating harder and harder
My hands wont stop shaking
My thoughts are growing bigger
My eyes are getting cracked
I feel so sick if i even dare to eat
my patience with myself is fading


Scheme ABCDDEDFGE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 111 1101101111101 1111101 1111010010 1111010010 111110 1111010 111101 11111110111 11011110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 335
Words 73
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 261
Words per stanza (avg) 66
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Written on August 22, 2023

Submitted by jeante_d on August 22, 2023

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