Analysis of Dearest memory loss



sadness is not knowing your smile…
not remembering your laughter…
not being able to recall your voice
or to feel your breath you breathed
for I had no choice
you left when I had just a little voice
and now I might not know
your smile
your laugh
your voice
your breath
but I know if I had just a glimpse of what I lost
I’d remember it, completely, absolutely & all…


Scheme ABCDCCEAFCGHI
Poetic Form
Metre 10111011 10100110 110101111 1111111 11111 1111110101 011111 11 11 11 11 1111111011111 101010100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 372
Words 72
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 286
Words per stanza (avg) 72

About this poem

I wrote this around 10 years ago. about the loss of someone at a young age. (Most of the poems I write have no titles. so I never know what to put there.)

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Written on August 24, 2023

Submitted by Harmonyca on August 24, 2023

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