Analysis of While Raining Inside Both Our Heart



Yes, we both made
Some mistakes
but
A true love
shall
Give and take
with
Words pouring out
From
these weary clouds
still
Raining inside
both
Our hearts


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMN
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 101 1 011 1 101 1 1101 1 1101 1 1001 1 101
Characters 155
Words 31
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 9
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Written on August 25, 2023

Submitted by ggolden9 on August 25, 2023

Modified by ggolden9 on August 26, 2023

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