Analysis of Thank you



Oh lady sweet dream o mine,
Conspired might be the universe,
When I go into your senses.
It's just a meme for your mind.
Tell me a story bout your life,
Hopefully you won't lie.
Depends on our messages,
How they fulfill our stages,
Singing a  song to me as a messenger,
Telling the world how mine u r until my last breath.
While I prohibit others to see how you look when on bed, and driving until we loose consciousness.
Tell me baby are you okay, for me the best, of all out there, even though you are the same girl I met in a perfect sphere, not the best poem in there, but one that says how you were, later that evening we met and sat on the stairs. Frankly you were the dreams of any man who wants the better for he cares. Let it be known for his adventures. He will be yours inside outside anywhere. Let it fly he'll come back for more situations,
Might be worth to try just one more chance until these two creatures devore as animals, hooking up to each other like just we care. Rich or poor, you have taken this into the best care


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Poetic Form
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Characters 1,038
Words 217
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 62
Words per line (avg) 16
Letters per stanza (avg) 804
Words per stanza (avg) 206
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Submitted on August 27, 2023

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