Analysis of Skipping a stone

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



By any mellow mood equation

So it seems
this heart is taken

You have gotten under my skin,
Why should i try to deny it

When clearly
you are the star In my prayers hopes and dreams

i sing of what you are to me

You are kind compassionate caring
Sharing our visions as we kiss

Look one another
in the eye as our hearts dance together

Skipping a stone

Passion flows from here to eternity
Touching every star

Whenever you and i feel naughty
we nasty kiss igniting, kindling

Feeding the passion with the pulse
Until it gets so strong

gravity
Overcomes our other senses

And we push pull each other
Towards some quiet place

we go
To celebrate moments of expressions
We can no longer contain in our hearts mind

Skipping a stone

Adventurous, we look across eternal seas of time
To rediscover all the lovers creeds

Spoken between those
Who have ever had a love to share

Love expressions
Too powerful to let go of

As i surrender my heart to you
For a moment of bliss

when our love tides coincide
We tie our tongues together

As we do our ritual love dance
Loving and daring,

Oblivious to
What you are or are not wearing

You are beautiful to me

You are the messenger
You deliver love magic

We send to one another
From voices deep within

Spoken in a language without words
Quietly understood between our hearts

Skipping a stone

Here, as i lay dreaming
No doubt in heat

Drifting in passions warm embrace
Navigating the waters of our hearts

On this our journey
Singing of love and of life

In the Love

The moon and stars

Copyright ©2023 CEF2


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Poetic Form
Metre 110101010 111 11110 11101011 11111011 110 1101011101 11111111 111010010 101010111 11010 00111011010 1001 1011110100 101001 010101110 110101010 10010101 011111 100 10101010 0111110 011101 11 110101010 111100101011 1001 01001101010111 1001010101 10011 111010111 1010 11001111 110101111 101011 1101101 11101010 1111010011 10010 01001 11111110 1110011 110100 1010110 1111010 110101 100010011 1000101101 1001 111110 1101 10010101 1000101101 111010 1011011 001 0101 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,596
Words 349
Sentences 1
Stanzas 33
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 58
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 37
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Written on October 08, 2006

Submitted by Charles2 on September 01, 2023

1:44 min read
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