Analysis of strawberry moon



It was dark but clear
 you were not there but close to near

You had gone to be alone
 I felt your presence still even though your gone

I look up to see the reddish moon and stars
 I feel your near me where ever you are

If I get lonely or somewhat scared
 I can look upon the strawberry moon and your here

If you can't be here physically and now
 ill take whatever time you give to me

I don't wish upon the stars but soon
 I will be wishing upon the strawberry moon.


Scheme AA XX XX XX XX BB
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 11111 10111111 1111101 11110110111 11111010101 1111111011 111101111 111010101011 11111100001 111011111 111010111 11110010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 470
Words 101
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 60
Words per stanza (avg) 16

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losing loved one but always having them near

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Written on August 10, 2023

Submitted by tavares_tammy2003 on August 10, 2023

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