Analysis of Torrent



My love for her flowed on and on
With currents strong and wide.
How could I know they'd flow upon
A sandbar on the side.

I did my best to tenderly
Pull her away from all
That kept her far away from me
And then a waterfall

Enticed her to let go and then
She went down on her own.
The water took my tears again
And left me on my own.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF
Poetic Form Traditional rhyme
Quatrain 
Metre 11101101 110101 11111101 01101 11111100 100111 11010111 01010 01011101 111101 01011101 011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 333
Words 77
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

Strong unrequited love

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Written on September 08, 2023

Submitted by stevec.24118 on September 08, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on September 08, 2023

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