Analysis of Pain



Drop, drop, drop goes the rain.
As it pounds upon my veins.
A cool breeze begins to blow.
She whispers to me she must go.
At about the twelve hour it slowly
begins to shower. I feel a dull, sharp
pain. As I begin to go insane.
Standing, waiting for my phone ring.
A depressing song comes on so I
begin to sing. The taste of blood in
my mouth. As I take the knife and
go down south my last few
thoughts before it goes black,
are of how much I want her back.


Scheme ABCCDEAFGHIJKK
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 1110111 0110111 11011111 1010110110 0111011011 111011101 10101111 001011111 011101110 11111010 111111 101111 11111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 460
Words 106
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 346
Words per stanza (avg) 95
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