Analysis of Our Love Still Etched In Stone



Our love still etched in stone, a lasting mark,
In the tapestry of time, through light and dark.
Though years may pass, and seasons may roam,
In the heart of eternity, our love finds its home.

Like ancient carvings on a weathered wall,
In the annals of forever, our love does enthral.
Through life's journey, in the unknown zone,
Our love endures, still etched in stone.

In the echoes of laughter, in the silent night,
Our love's enduring flame, an eternal light.
Though the world may change, and we may roam,
In the book of the cosmos, our love's the cornerstone.

So let time march on, let rivers cease to flow,
Our love remains steadfast, a river's endless glow.
Through the ages, as the universe has grown,
Our love's legacy, forever etched in stone.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEBD FFDD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 10111010101 00100111101 111101011 00110100101111 1101010101 00101010101101 111000011 101011101 001011000101 101010110101 101110111 0011010101010 11111110111 101011010101 1010101011 101100010101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 756
Words 152
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 146
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Written on September 12, 2023

Submitted by ggolden9 on September 13, 2023

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