Analysis of My Best Friend



I can tell that you are going through a lot
Believe me I'm someone who would know
I see the struggles you are facing
I've been down the same road

Your pain won't last forever
I thought mine would last that long
We feel our pain now but we won’t later
By then if we choose our pain will feel a lot better

If you ever need someone to talk to
If you ever feel you are lonely
Just know I'm here for you
Also know that you are part of my family

Don't focus on your pain
Focus on all your progress
I know it seems you've lost a lot
But there's still more for you to gain
Just remember all of your SUCCESS

Life will always knock you down
But it's your choice to get back up
Don't be ashamed to have a frown
If you get back up, you have some luck

Take deep breaths and sit back
Everything will be A okay
And just calm down and relax
Either now or another day

Everyone you come across or meet
They are fighting a lot of battles
And a whole bigger and dangerous war
That we don't know anything about

Whenever you get knocked down and fall
Whenever you need someone to talk to
I will be here to answer when you call
I will be available to go for a walk

Do not at all ever forget
Everything you were taught
All these years you've learned a lot
I hope you will remember that

Be a star in the night
Be the shine in the light
I will  always be your friend
All the way to the very end
Because you have always been my best friend

It is always okay when you
You aren't weak if you cry
Don't listen to all the haters
Because they are living a big lie


Scheme AXXX BXBB CDCD EFAEF GXGX XHXH XXXX ICIX XXAX JJKKK CLXL
Poetic Form
Metre 11111110101 01111111 110101110 111011 1111010 1111111 11101111110 11111101110110 111011111 111011110 111111 101111111100 110111 101111 11111101 11111111 101011101 111111 11111111 11011101 111111111 111011 101101 0111001 10110101 10110111 111001110 0011001001 11111001 010111101 010111111 1111110111 111010011101 11111001 10101 1111101 11110101 101001 101001 111111 10110101 011111111 111111 1101111 11011010 011110011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,548
Words 331
Sentences 1
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 4
Lines Amount 46
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

It originally was about one of best friend who was struggling with a lot to help her but then I came to realize that it also helped other people feel care, loved, wanted, and not alone.

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Written on November 25, 2022

Submitted by nerf.kin88 on September 18, 2023

Modified by nerf.kin88 on September 26, 2023

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