Analysis of My Unborn Child



My Unborn Child

Sits inside on his or her mother’s wound.

Taking on human form being shaped into a baby boy or girl as it grows from a mere fetus over the period of nine months.

My unborn child brings me much joy and happiness and yet at the same time brings me a feeling of worry.

Because I know what lies ahead for me as a soon to be father.

One who knows that play time is over now.

For I now have a life to support.

Taking on a lifelong challenge trying to give my daughter or son more than I had as a child.

After being raised by a widowed mother.

I pray for long life so that I will be blessed by the Lord to be around to see my child grow up and succeed at getting educated and make me a proud parent.

My unborn child sits inside of his or her mother stomach not knowing what awaits here on earth outside of the stomach which he or she eats sleeps and grows in.

As I await and prepare for my child to be born health and strong receiving many blessings from our Lord the creator of all things that have come to be in this world.


Scheme A X X X B X X A B X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1011110101 1011011010101011111110110100100111 11111111010001101111010110 01111101111011110 1111111101 111101101 101011101011110111111101 10101101010 1111111111110111011111110011101000110110 111110111101010110101111111010111111010 110100111111110101010101101001011111111011
Characters 1,058
Words 242
Sentences 11
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 68
Words per line (avg) 18
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

Poem from my book title A Sinner's Prayer's Poem about being a parent www.jelindsey.com

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Submitted by jlpoet on September 29, 2023

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