Analysis of The Dark House

JESUS BETANCOURT 1955 (New York)



At the entrance of a west coast bay
Stands an abandoned light house in the harbor
No longer signals danger for ships to stay away
GPS guides them with a laser buoy marker

The now Dark House doesn't have a live keeper
A ghost occupies it without a task
Passing ship crews noticing it feel creepier
When waved at by a Phantom with a mask


Scheme ABAB BCBC
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 101010111 11010110010 1101010111101 11110101010 01111010110 011010101 1011100111 1111010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 336
Words 66
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

October poems are spookier.

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Written on October 05, 2023

Submitted on October 06, 2023

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