Analysis of July 21 2023



You can’t look at me with those eyes like there are unsaid words between us
You can’t hold my hand like you never wanna let go
You can’t converse with me and tell me it will always be me
You can’t keep hold of me asking for a spark
You can’t hug me and hold me and tell me you never wanna let go
You can’t expect me to keep all of our promises
You can’t do all of these things and expect me not to love you a little more each time
You can’t expect me not to fall when i already have
Fallen for a person i can never have


Scheme ABCDBEFGG
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111111011011 1111111101011 11101101111111 11111110101 11110110111101011 11011111110100 111111100111111010111 11011111110101 10101011101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 542
Words 118
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 400
Words per stanza (avg) 112

About this poem

This poem is about a person who you have fallen for at the wrong time, and never know if they’re will ever be a right time

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Written on July 24, 2033

Submitted by Rubymaianelson on September 09, 2023

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