Analysis of MY PAST



Oh how lovely it would be
If my past were now
And now we're my past

My suckling days
With no fear or anxiety
Forever under
Mother's protection

I panic
For I am growing older
I fear
For I am to be productive

With no penny
From my guardian
I work like a donkey

If I could go back
To my sweet fourteen
Forever like that
With all the love and care.


Scheme AXX XABC XBXX ACA XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111 11101 01111 1101 11110100 01010 10010 110 1111010 11 11111010 1110 11100 111010 11111 11111 01011 110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 348
Words 76
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 3, 4
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

This poem is all about child hood memories of a young adult I have my pen and I pen my past

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Submitted by uwaoma_v on September 13, 2023

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