Analysis of The New Commandment



I am writing no new precept,
Rather an old one from the start;
The old commandment you accept,
Is of the Word that you impart.

The new commandment that I write,
Since the darkness passes away;
Already shining the true light,
That will assist you to obey.

If you say you are in the light,
And you are hating your brother;
Then you walk in the dark of night,
For the feelings of another.

If you are loving your brother,
Then you do abide by the light;
You stumble not for each other,
And will find favor in God’s sight.

Hating your brother in the dark,
Then the darkness blinding your eyes;
Aimlessly walking to embark,
Will not see Satan in disguise.

Copyright ©2023 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CDCD CECE ECEC FGFG E
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111 10111101 01010101 11011101 01010111 10101001 01010011 11011101 11111001 01110110 11100111 10101010 11110110 11101101 11011110 01110011 10110001 10101011 10010101 11110001 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 696
Words 152
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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Keeping God’s Commandments 1 John 2:7-11

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Written on October 11, 2023

Submitted by richardnsherrer on October 10, 2023

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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