Analysis of Misplaced Expectations



I used to feel bad luck was real
In all I did or say.
It often seemed to be that way
No matter what the deal.

Each day I felt that life had delt
Worst-case scenarios,
While walking on my aching toes
As dreams began to melt.

I hesitate; did I create
Self-fulfilling prophesies,
As real as all the winter trees
Which I cannot debate.

In time I might learn how to fight
The fallacy of well-laid plans
When I ease up on life's demands
And keep my faith in sight!


Scheme ABBA CDDC CXXC CXXC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 11111111 011111 11011111 110101 11111111 110100 11011101 110111 1101101 1010100 11110101 111001 01111111 01001111 11111101 011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 461
Words 100
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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What I should expect

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Written on October 16, 2023

Submitted by stevec.24118 on October 17, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on October 17, 2023

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