Analysis of Hatchling of springtime



Soft was the bluebird I held in my mind
for it was a hatchling of springtime.
Gently the wind opened swirls of devine and swayed on the nests that I layed there.
I could not contain the dear love that was mine as it took a fine hold of my being.
Miracles leaped like alertness entwined in the sugary light of my daydream.
Sweeter the air grew in purest lament as the souls danced around in its beams.
Floating like bubbles the angels arrived on the flickering light blessed streams.
Daisy's and daffodils danced like the dears
and the lambs bounced there way over meadows.
Earth spun a path of lifes heartwarming fun and the shepherd's watched the stars appearing.
A pillow of happiness cuddled the babe
and all were graced by his laughing.


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Poetic Form
Metre 110111011 1110111 1001101101011011111 111010111111110111110 1001101001001001111 1001101001101101011 101100100110100111 100101101 001111101 1101111010010101010 01011001001 01011110
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 748
Words 142
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 50
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 596
Words per stanza (avg) 134
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Written on October 18, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 18, 2023

Modified by heathert.34240 on October 18, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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