Analysis of A message to you.
Message To You
I've been trying to get this message to you.
The hate you feel is not with me, it's inside you.
I've been through what you've been through.
I wondered why you always threw it at me,
I understand now it was easier for you to be.
I was devastated and lonely when you disposed of me.
I can't change you, but I've learned how to protect me.
Our lives were hard, not for the weak. The anger still speaks.
I've been trying to get this message to you.
The hate you feel is not with me, it's inside you.
I've been through what you've been through.
I felt your pain and hurt and I protected you.
All I wanted was the same from you.
I've got the rest of my life to live without you, and I'll miss you.
It'll take a lot of work to remove your residue.
My protection exists without the existence of you.
By Joelle Miller
Scheme | a A A A b b b b x A A A a a a a a x |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011 11101111011 011111111011 1111111 1101111111 1011111001111 11100010110111 111111111011 10101110101011 11101111011 011111111011 1111111 111101010101 111010111 1101111110110111 1010111101110 10100101001011 10110 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 841 |
Words | 196 |
Sentences | 17 |
Stanzas | 18 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 35 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 35 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 9 |
About this poem
This poem is about a very sad and traumatic time in my life. I have no professional experience, but writing has helped me to heal from the experience.
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