Analysis of Whispering Rainbows



My soul
Finds itself
Stunned,
Entwined amidst
The shattered
Fragments
Of emotion
And longing,
Burdened by
The tumultuous
Weight
Of a wounded
Existence

And I feel
So blessed
To be alive.

It's better to hurt
Than to feel
Nothing at all.


Scheme XXXXXXXXXXXXX AXX XAX
Poetic Form
Metre 11 101 1 0101 010 10 1010 010 101 0100 1 1010 010 011 11 1101 11011 111 1011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 248
Words 56
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 13, 3, 3
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 10
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

This poem expresses the speaker's current emotional state. They describe their soul as being stunned and entwined in the shattered fragments of their emotions and longing. They feel burdened by the heavy weight of a wounded existence. Despite this, the speaker feels blessed and grateful to be alive.

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Written on October 28, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on October 28, 2023

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Joe Strickland

I'm just a regular, blue collar, working stiff who took an interest in writing poetry many years ago but until recently I haven't had a desire to share any with anyone or pursue publication. I'm an unpublished fork lift operator by night, and a day drinker by choice. I can be followed on Twitter @JoeStricklandSC more…

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