Analysis of Wings of water



It might be that clouds replaced the wings of angels at first and turned them into storms.
Forms.
But we have many trinkets, videos and magical types of wings to replace and record them or remove them.
Tremble.
What if there had never been clouds.
Could you choose between God, Wings and Concepts.
Upsets.
Does your head say imagine wings but your heart say return to God to learn new concepts or does a female Godess tell you with concepts to feel your wings, so you can love God.
Mod?

God with image, wings in words, words with concepts.
Or do you first think... Then... Then...
Hen?
Are you still attached to words?
Are you still attached to dreams?
Are you still attached to heart?
Startled!

Are you attached to nothing or everything extremes? Are you attached to the mediation process?
Recess?

Are you ready to get a divorce without even getting married and even moving to a new house?
Lion? Mouse? Libra huh

But this is my responsibility, what's your responsibility?
Growing up? Looking young? Fighting fitness? Lesson planning?


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111110111011011011 1 111101010001001111100111011 10 11111011 1110111010 01 1111010111110111111101101111110111111111 1 11101011110 1111111 1 1110111 1110111 1110111 10 1101110110011101100101 01 11101100101101010010101011 101101 1111001001100100 10110110101010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,051
Words 204
Sentences 30
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 9, 7, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 163
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

Cloudy air cleans your underwater. Justice can be a silly poem.

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Written on October 30, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 29, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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