Analysis of Tools in his glorious narrative



How do you read the world?

Same shit different day!

Where did this saying come from?

When has any day been the same as the next?

Beyond the obvious wish

Have you even seen beyond the sun and ground you walk on

And tried to follow your real part to play in his narritive

Every word and thought was and is and will

Yes no one seems to care and people think they've felt or done what they wanted all before

But did anyone look at you that little bit longer than usual

Did a sign post somehow link your thoughts to a colour or light in someone's window

Did you look at your reflection for long enough to see that new feature or add a sprinkle to the master of his artpiece

Did you ever fantasise about things stopping at your command or just stopping somewhere on your way
to see outside your usual gaze

Maybe you had a unique way of deciding what to buy or cooked a new food without the recipe

Maybe you became more ordered and focused on the microscopic reasonings

Remember you are a splash of colour on this not just the brush


Scheme X A X X X X X X X X X B AB X B X
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 111001 1111011 11101101101 0101001 11101010101111 0111011111011 10010110101 111111010111111110101 11101111101101100 10111111101110110 111110101101111110110101010111 1110101110110111101111 111111001 1011001111011111011010100 10101110010100101 010110111111101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,041
Words 218
Sentences 5
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 51
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Written on October 31, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 31, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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