Analysis of NeoN's Persistance



When anger urged me to fight, I practiced patience to set things right.
It's not just about being quiet but about taking flight.
It helped me discover peace in my life's light.

When anger was near, I felt no fear. I believed patience would make it disappear.

Patience is like a puzzle, hard to understand,
But it solves all the dazzle, making it easier to stand.

It's a slow lesson to learn, as I've tasted, not a game of only Day 1, as I've tasted.

Patience takes time to learn, as I know.
It takes patience to learn, as I know.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101111110101111 111011010101101 11101010111 1101111111011011101 10110101101 111101010110011 1011011111010111011110 101111111 111011111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 533
Words 113
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 1, 2, 1, 2
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

I wrote this poem to express how PATIENCE solve my real-life problems , like , anger issues , it all solve cuz , of PATIENCE and I described this in my POEM "NeoN's Persistance".

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Written on September 07, 2010

Submitted by NeoN_Zephyr. on November 05, 2023

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NeoN Zephyr.

I am a 13 y/o kid , who likes to read stories and find new words , I improved my literacy while doing this , and now , i am writing POEMS , about my real-life-experiences , i am using my literacy skills to write them. :) more…

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