Analysis of Soft As Water



Soft As Water

You are soft as water
And I am immersed with you.
Your smooth skin and intimate parts
Eyes, voice, lips, breasts, and sex
Ignite and inspire my affections
To cover you in my ocean
Raise you into the sky
And fly through your Heaven.

Here in this warm bath
I spread you so wide open
My passion enters
Your wet paradise of ecstasy
Excitement and energy
Wrap your thighs around me
I am surrounded by love
Personal as the air I breathe.

Your soul radiates warmth
Through your hands
I feel your presence
Pressing against me
Your legs engulf my waist
Drawing me inside
Our togetherness comes
In endless waves of pleasure.

After repeated fury
Our bodies calm down
Kisses blossom in our embrace
As lotus fragrant with tenderness
We fall into sleep
Each as the others baby
Serenity surrounds us
The world feels peaceful.

Our liquid existence flows
Back and forth in waves
Waxing and waning
With the blue moon
Your sexy nude body
Revives me to erect you
You are soft as water
And I am immersed with you.

Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
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Scheme a ABxxxcxc xcxdddxx xxxdxxxa dxxexdex xxxxdbAB xa
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 111110 0110111 11101001 111101 010011010 11010110 110101 011110 10111 1111110 11010 11101100 0100100 111011 1101011 10010111 11101 111 11110 10011 110111 10101 1001001 0101110 1001010 101011 101001001 110101100 11011 1101010 0100011 01110 10100101 10101 10010 1011 110110 0111011 111110 0110111 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,273
Words 241
Sentences 8
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 2
Lines Amount 43
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 146
Words per stanza (avg) 33

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Written on November 06, 2023

Submitted by charlesyork14 on November 06, 2023

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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