Analysis of Whispered love

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



Id whisper love into your rapture
Each breath of life a gift id capture
If only angel hands could suture
Each of our pains causing this fracture

Each tender taste that keeps us here
A moment lapsed, a single beer
God take away each simple fear
And lonely thought that raised a tear

Drink from this cup a step of light
To express this cold grown night
As we sleep and muster might
Envelope our hearts so tight


Scheme AAAA XBBX CCCC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 110101110 111101110 110101110 1110110110 11011111 01010101 11011101 01011101 11110111 1011111 1110101 1010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 415
Words 85
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 110
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Written on November 08, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on November 08, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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