Analysis of The Apple in My Hand



The apple in my hand is rotting

It’s decay like perfume

Your apple is alive

Teeming with life

Oh, how I wish I had your apple!

To get rid of my tainted fruit

And exchange for your wondrous crop

Would surely be a marvel

My apple is rotting

Yours is alive

You pity mine

And I yearn yours


Scheme A X B X C X X C A B X X
Poetic Form
Metre 010011110 101101 110101 1011 111111110 11111101 00111101 1101010 110110 1101 1101 0111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 303
Words 75
Sentences 2
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 19
Words per stanza (avg) 5

About this poem

This poem is about the desire to live somebody else's life. I wrote this poem because I've always wondered what it would be like to be somebody else.

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Written on November 10, 2023

Submitted by JakeWilliams on November 10, 2023

Modified by JakeWilliams on November 10, 2023

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