Analysis of Shining
I see you shining like a beautiful star I remember the days being drunk in the dark at the bar A sinful life for all mankind, no one is perfect, and I’m not lying God’s servants said that in God’s word have you heard ? A gift to us and telling us instructions on how to live and why you shine ‘ Created in God’s image, and that’s fine . Why are we jealously of talented people, is it fair to say he’s treated ? Equal because of the Gift God” gave: but when it’s all said & finish the world will remember ur gift while you’re deceased in the grave make a name with Jehovah” not. With the world, which is controlled by Satan and his underworld. I can’t trust me or control my own steps, around the same age as Mike Epps’ the actor who’s shining for. This system of things, saying it in a poem because I prefer not to sing Are you thanking the Good lord for shining in this dark world that’s ending ? or it’s just fake smiles and pretending. Except this is the real life ! and not a movie with bad actors with no script and not being choosy Demons Directing this planet until the end until God step in ‘ But we're still shining in a world of darkness Because Jah” got this! My joy is seeing us living forever with perfect health perfect bodies and perfect. Weather ! So stop hating from afar you too are a beautiful as you are shining like a wonderful star
| Scheme | A |
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| Metre | 11110101001101001101001101010111111110101110110110111110111010101011110111010011001111110011001011111110100110111111111001101011110100110110101101110111001101111101111010111110101101110111010010011011111110011110011111011111001001110110101011101110110101001011001010111011110001110011111111011001010110110001101110101111010011110101001 |
| Characters | 1,393 |
| Words | 260 |
| Sentences | 13 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1 |
| Lines Amount | 1 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 1,048 |
| Words per line (avg) | 270 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,048 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 270 |
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I see you shining like a beautiful star I remember the days being drunk in the dark at the bar A sinful life for all mankind, no one is perfect and I’m not lying God’s servants said that in God’s word have you heard ? A gift to us and telling us instructions on how to live and why you shine ‘ Created in God’s image and that’s fine . Why are we jealously of talented people is it fair to say he’s treated ? equal because of the Gift God” gave: but when it’s all said & finish the world will remember ur gift while you’re deceased in the grave make a name with Jehovah” not. With the world which is controlled by Satan and his underworld. I can’t trust me or control my own steps/around the same age as Mike Epps the actor who’s shining for. This system of things saying it in a poem cause I prefer not to sing Are you thanking the Good lord for shining in this dark world that’s ending ? or it’s just fake smiles and pretending. except this is the real life ! and not a movie with bad actors with no script and not being choosy Demons Directing this planet until the end until God step in ‘ But we still shining in a world of darkness Because Jah” got this My joy is seeing us living for ever with perfect health perfect bodies and perfect. weather ! so stop hating from afar you too are a beautiful as you are shining like wonderful star more »
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