Analysis of Tallula on my Mind
The band is playing on a Friday night and
Johnny’s drinking his Captain and Coke
Is being here wrong or right?
I smell like whiskey and cigarette smoke
I know better and so do you but sometimes we throw caution to the wind
Hell to pay but that’ll wait til tomorrow
Tonight I have Tallula on my mind
No one’s watching
At least we hope
Let’s do a shot
And a little dope
Take the edge off
Time to chill
A little rush
A little thrill
Slide on over
No one can see
I’ll dance a little with you
If you’ll dance a little with me
You better not drive
Let me take you home
It’s the least I can do
I know you’re faking
Just like we planned
But I’m willing to see this through
We’ll take the long way
Hope for the best
A few precious minutes alone
It’s do or die
Now or never
Time to win or else we go home
The problem with dreams
Is they come to an end
Always for better or worse
My thoughts of you
Can tend to expand
Until reality bursts
I wake up to find
Another morning alone
No mystery, no surprise
A cup of black coffee
An empty bottle of Jack
And Tallula on my mind
Scheme | XAXABXB CDXDXEXEFGHG XIHCJHXXKXFI XXXHJXBKXGXB |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01110101010 11011001 1101111 111100011 111001111011110101 111111101 0111010111 1110 1111 1101 00101 1011 111 0101 0101 1110 1111 1101011 11101011 11011 11111 101111 11110 1111 11101111 11011 1101 01101001 1111 1110 11111111 01011 111111 111011 1111 11101 01101 11111 0101001 1100101 011110 1101011 0010111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,088 |
Words | 225 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 7, 12, 12, 12 |
Lines Amount | 43 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 208 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 55 |
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