Analysis of Said Hanrahan
John O'Brien 1878 (Yass, New South Wales) – 1952 (United Kingdom)
"We'll all be rooned," said Hanrahan,
In accents most forlorn,
Outside the church, ere Mass began,
One frosty Sunday morn.
The congregation stood about,
Coat-collars to the ears,
And talked of stock, and crops, and drought,
As it had done for years.
"It's looking crook," said Daniel Croke;
"Bedad, it's cruke, me lad,
For never since the banks went broke
Has seasons been so bad."
"It's dry, all right," said young O'Neil,
With which astute remark
He squatted down upon his heel
And chewed a piece of bark.
And so around the chorus ran
"It's keepin' dry, no doubt."
"We'll all be rooned," said Hanrahan,
"Before the year is out."
"The crops are done; ye'll have your work
To save one bag of grain;
From here way out to Back-o'-Bourke
They're singin' out for rain.
"They're singin' out for rain," he said,
"And all the tanks are dry."
The congregation scratched its head,
And gazed around the sky.
"There won't be grass, in any case,
Enough to feed an ass;
There's not a blade on Casey's place
As I came down to Mass."
"If rain don't come this month," said Dan,
And cleared his throat to speak -
"We'll all be rooned," said Hanrahan,
"If rain don't come this week."
A heavy silence seemed to steal
On all at this remark;
And each man squatted on his heel,
And chewed a piece of bark.
"We want an inch of rain, we do,"
O'Neil observed at last;
But Croke "maintained" we wanted two
To put the danger past.
"If we don't get three inches, man,
Or four to break this drought,
We'll all be rooned," said Hanrahan,
"Before the year is out."
In God's good time down came the rain;
And all the afternoon
On iron roof and window-pane
It drummed a homely tune.
And through the night it pattered still,
And lightsome, gladsome elves
On dripping spout and window-sill
Kept talking to themselves.
It pelted, pelted all day long,
A-singing at its work,
Till every heart took up the song
Way out to Back-o'-Bourke.
And every creek a banker ran,
And dams filled overtop;
"We'll all be rooned," said Hanrahan,
"If this rain doesn't stop."
And stop it did, in God's good time;
And spring came in to fold
A mantle o'er the hills sublime
Of green and pink and gold.
And days went by on dancing feet,
With harvest-hopes immense,
And laughing eyes beheld the wheat
Nid-nodding o'er the fence.
And, oh, the smiles on every face,
As happy lad and lass
Through grass knee-deep on Casey's place
Went riding down to Mass.
While round the church in clothes genteel
Discoursed the men of mark,
And each man squatted on his heel,
And chewed his piece of bark.
"There'll be bush-fires for sure, me man,
There will, without a doubt;
We'll all be rooned," said Hanrahan,
"Before the year is out."
Around the Boree Log and Other Verses, 1921
Scheme | Abab cdcd efef ghgH acAC ijij klkl mnmn aoAo ghGH pqpq acAC jrjr stst uiui avAv wxwx yzyz mnmn ghGh acACx |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 11111100 010101 11011101 11011 0010101 110101 01110101 111111 11011101 11111 11010111 110111 11111101 110101 1110111 010111 01010101 11111 11111100 010111 01111111 111111 11111111 11111 1111111 010111 0010111 010101 11110101 011111 11011101 111111 11111111 011111 11111100 111111 01010111 111101 0111111 010111 11111111 010111 11011101 110101 11111101 111111 11111100 010111 01111101 01001 11010101 110101 01011101 0111 11010101 110101 11010111 010111 110011101 111111 010010101 0111 11111100 111101 01110111 011011 010100101 110101 01111101 110101 0101101 1101001 010111001 110101 11111101 110111 11010101 10111 0111111 011111 1011101111 110101 11111100 010111 0101101010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 2,846 |
Words | 607 |
Sentences | 24 |
Stanzas | 21 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5 |
Lines Amount | 85 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 97 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
About this poem
John O'Brien published "Around the Boree Log and Other Verses", 1921 A brief, affectionate glimpse of life in the Australian not-quite-outback (that comes after Bourke!) with some pleasant, lyrical imagery. I met it in a talk by an Australian about "Climate". It struck me so vividly as something that could be written today, even down to the banking crash of 1893 a decade earlier, except for the optimistic tone. I know nothing about poetry and suspect this is verse, or even doggerel, to you, but it spoke to me so strongly of an eternal truth, in my own vernacular, that I'll never forget it. more »
Written on 1921
Submitted on November 13, 2023
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