Analysis of She smiled



She smiled then looked away
And didn't say a word.
Her eyes wished to stay
That's what my heart heard.

She whispered I would be OK
Tho her voice was deterred.
Your eyes wanted to stay
But your vision was blurred.


Scheme ABAB ABAB
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 111101 010101 01111 11111 11011111 101101 111011 111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 214
Words 46
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

Wrote while sitting in ER with my 93 year old mother

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Written on November 13, 2023

Submitted by Foreverinhereyes on November 13, 2023

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