Analysis of Heartbroken hands



Heart broken in my hands
Your tears took the sparkles
Of my distant lands
That could not hold you
You had to run free
And fight rough terrain here
Bring tears to this tree
With sunlight it felt free
Then on return
Just like an angel
I looked at your smile
Once again in mine
Could it be real
This Image so true
How does it feel
In this midnight blue eye
As we sail free
Leaving troubles behind me
Believe in this eternity
Each piece of my heart
Called out your name in tears
My soul in each one
Seeking your shoulder
It can never hide
As the rain tried and tried
To find your bliss
In my simple kiss
You could never miss


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Characters 621
Words 126
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28
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Written on November 18, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on November 18, 2023

Modified by heathert.34240 on November 18, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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