Analysis of Give me your life



You sit
I sit
Your gun is armed
My gun is armed
You wait
I wait
Your hand is primed
My hand is primed
You're there
I'm here
Your brain brought you there
My brain brought me here
You won't come out
I won't go out
Your stomach is empty
My stomach is empty
They're gone
They're gone
You won't quit
I wont give up my life
You're afraid
I'm afraid
So give me your life.
Give me your life!


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Poetic Form
Metre 11 11 1111 1111 11 11 1111 1111 11 11 11111 11111 1111 1111 110110 110110 11 11 111 111111 101 101 11111 1111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 384
Words 81
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 293
Words per stanza (avg) 80
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Written on November 21, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on November 21, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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