Analysis of Shhh !

JESUS BETANCOURT 1955 (New York)



Scratchy scattering sounds I'm hearing again
In the dark from above inside the ceiling
Creeping noise that's driving me insane
Goosebumps I am uncontrollably revealing

Shush ! listen it's something crawling
Open eyes spy a pinhole light
Catching spiraling dust that is falling
Obscuring my vision of intruders sight

Blah ! blowing dust away
I heard it disappearing
I'm glad it didn't want to stay
Hope it doesn't plan on returning


Scheme XAXA ABAB CACA
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 10100111001 00110101010 101110101 1110100010 11011010 1011011 1010011110 01011010101 110101 111010 11110111 111011010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 432
Words 71
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 24

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Written on December 05, 2023

Submitted on December 05, 2023

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