Analysis of Mother and Him
Tear stained cheeks, bruises left on me
His yellow teeth, in the closet hiding
Shit on the wall, noose around my neck
Things I haven't said
Some days it's all I think about,
In the back of my mind reaching every little tendril of thought
The fact that you chose him, a man,
A stranger, over me, your child
The fact that to this day you see nothing wrong with your actions, to this day you're ensnared by his wile
Here I am holding on to the past because it's embedded deeply into every cell, around my body surrounding me like a cast
Sometimes I still see him in the shadows, Sometimes I dream about him holding me down, I hope if you're reading this you frown
The scars that are invisible because they're in my head, in my memories
And when you're feeling guilt, I hope you think of me
Sometimes at night I lay there staring at the wall, because in darkness no one will see me fall. So no one will see the tear stains on my cheeks, no one will look down on me
It's you that I blame for all the shame that I carry on my shoulders, it is you that I blame for my self-hatred
Because maybe if my mom had been there for me, I would know how to be there for myself. Maybe I would know how to ask for help
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Metre | 11110111 1101001010 110110111 11101 11111101 0011111010010111 01111101 01010111 011111111011110111101111 11110110101101010011001011100101101 01111100101110111011111110111 0111010001101101100 011101111111 01111111010101010111111111110111111111111 1111111011110111011111111110 0110111111111111111111011111111 |
Characters | 1,207 |
Words | 250 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 2, 3, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 16 |
Letters per line (avg) | 58 |
Words per line (avg) | 15 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 103 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 27 |
About this poem
This poem takes you on the journey of a young girl learning how to advocate for herself even against family
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Written on November 05, 2023
Submitted by walkingwiththewolves on November 06, 2023
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