Analysis of Two Souls

Joshua Johnson 2006 (Suffolk)



Two souls intertwined
One cursed;
The other with a need to be nursed.
Together they become blind.

One a lover.
A  true believer;
In this cruel world, he doth seem to bother,
thus, he became, a cursed lover.

The second cursed, from another-
who left in a hearse.
Suffused with a need to be nursed,
by one who hath the curse.

Cursed together;  
The Nursed, The Lover.
Two Souls bound,
in a cursed forever.


Scheme ABBA CCCC CDBD CCXC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 11001 11 010101111 0101011 1010 01010 01101111110 11010110 01011010 11001 01101111 111101 1010 01010 111 001010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 410
Words 90
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

It’s a poem about an unhealthy relationship, in which a boy falls utterly in love with a broken girl. He wants to help her and in turn they become blind to what is right for them. I feel this poem is all too relevant to today’s world.

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Written on November 27, 2023

Submitted by joshjrjohnson on November 28, 2023

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Joshua Johnson

I am a young writer who has had an interest in poetry for a while. I currently study English literature in England. more…

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