Analysis of Untitled



Emptiness feels like a pain that I’ve never known your heart sinks left feeling alone . No one can feel the way you do no one to care only you , the ones who made your hard times worse will be the ones claiming there hurt . The broken pieces they have chipped away will never matter to them they were never going to stay . No need to share the hurt they’ve done to you there unhuman like there nothing more you can do . Use what you will to make yourself feel whole this you have to carry in your empty soul. Mine may be broken and hurting so bad but for you I somehow still feel sad . You’ll never know love and for that I will take the break not knowing love is a risk I will never take .


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Characters 696
Words 137
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 536
Words per line (avg) 144
Letters per stanza (avg) 536
Words per stanza (avg) 144

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Feelings of hurt and feeling alone

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Written on November 29, 2023

Submitted by rrayannkite on November 29, 2023

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Rachel R Kite

Writing is a release I’ve known since a little girl , short stories in elementary school to life’s obstacles writing and poetry have been my way of coping . I wrote my first poem in high school as a assignment and have never stopped . Most all my writing is based on how I feel or things that have affected my life and views . more…

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