Analysis of Haiku (6-10)



6
beaming Houston glows
a soliloquy of sun,
the plate glass windows

7
man on patch of green,
layered concrete carpark stacks'
slant angles looming

8
leave and don't come back
from this day forth, I mean it,
mother to fledgling

9
excrement on shoes,
even once great cities fall,
their windsock whimseys

10
try to kill not wound
undetected, silently,
the hunter's secret


Scheme ABXB AXXC AXXC AXXB AXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1 10101 0010011 01110 1 11111 100111 11010 1 10111 1111111 10110 1 10011 1011101 111 1 11111 010100 01010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 420
Words 122
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted by James_Kirkpatrick on December 16, 2023

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