Analysis of Haiku (21-25)



21
through the woods we've walked
not every time emerging
with a tale to tell

22
seeking whom to maim,
idea-estuary bull
sharks prowl the shallows

23
gelding's diamond brow
white in winter field reflects
the garnet sunset

24
desperation seeds,
the dandelion shunts a
feathered dynasty

25
space remains for you
even when the pages close,
silverfish bookbug


Scheme AXBX AXXC AXCX ACXX AXCB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1 10111 11001010 10111 1 10111 0101001 1101 1 1101 1010101 0101 1 0101 010010 10100 1 10111 1010101 11
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 427
Words 134
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted by James_Kirkpatrick on December 16, 2023

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