Analysis of Is Our Simplest Eye Dews (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Is Our Simplest Eye Dews   (Bussokusekika)

There are thoughtful ways
For one to describe their tears
What of ours my love
And this long bloody highway
The hardest thing between us
Is our simplest eye dews

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   12/16/2023


Scheme X XXXXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11010111 11101 1110111 111011 011101 0101011 1101011 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 250
Words 45
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

I’m sure I’ll not let thee door hit me on my way out of this place…I’m surprised there is still blood pumping through our veins into our hearts…With all the blood we’ve left on the highways and byways…Not even I am perfect…I have made many I repeat many mistakes in my life…And if we’re not for me doing such…I would not be the man I am today…And what of the proverbial question…Ginger or Mary Ann???lol

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Written on December 16, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 16, 2023

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on December 16, 2023

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