Analysis of Top or Bottom

Jamie Tierney 1991 (Cardiff)



Remaining purposely stuck in past,
Allowing karmic cycles to last,
Absorbing others emotions becomes vast,
Abyss within instead loving steadfast,
Resolutely entrapped by their egocast.

Knowing ones value, never settle,
Focusing on soul song, crucial,
Freely choosing from inner signal,
Facing adversity, never wavering, central,
Karma from actions leading celestial.


Scheme AAAAA BBBBB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 010100101 01011011 01010010011 010101101 10001111 101101010 10011110 101011010 1001001010010 1011010010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 376
Words 60
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 5, 5
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

Decisions based around and or, off of others lead to inner unbalance.

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Written on December 21, 2023

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