Analysis of A Childlike Spirit



My heart is not lifted,
My eyes have not been raised high;
As I drink milk from my cup,
I cannot answer the why.

For I do not occupy,
Myself anything too great;
Too grand for me to defy,
I wish not to hesitate.

I had to calm down my soul,
That is weaned from its mother;
Like a child to control,
The actions of another.

For the hope is in the Lord,
This time forth and forever;
Letting Him not be ignored,
Israel, He won’t sever.

Copyright ©2023 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme XAXA ABAB CDCD EDED D
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 1111111 1111111 1101001 111110 11011 1111101 111110 1111111 1111110 101101 0101010 1011001 1110010 1011101 1001110 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 475
Words 112
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 72
Words per stanza (avg) 18

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I Have Calmed and Quieted My Soul Psalm 131

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Written on December 24, 2023

Submitted by richardnsherrer on December 23, 2023

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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